btw, there's no conclusion, cause I'm still with J.@Samantha P I just want to say that you love the attention you are getting, but I need comment as a member of the Writers Guild of America, you know how to write a compelling and dramatic story. So stop the bellyaching, you know you are a good storyteller and just reveal the riveting conclusion to this epic tale.
If you were ever interested in turning this into a real publishable script or story, id be very interested to help.