Hi there's, here's the start of a new piece of fiction I'm looking at writing.
So I drove upto my buddies house and parked up ready for an evening of video games, I knock on and Marcus let's me in, sat in the living room is I find his cousin jamal, whos in Uni, and staying with him as its cheaper than renting/halls, he asks if I have a GF and he says pity haha, and then gets up and goes out, he should be out all night now Marcus says, about 3 hours later the door goes and we hear Jamal, and a girl come in laughing and chatting, then we hear snogging, and then "suck it, slut".........
Just wondering if anyone would want me to continue writing this piece of fiction or nah?
So I drove upto my buddies house and parked up ready for an evening of video games, I knock on and Marcus let's me in, sat in the living room is I find his cousin jamal, whos in Uni, and staying with him as its cheaper than renting/halls, he asks if I have a GF and he says pity haha, and then gets up and goes out, he should be out all night now Marcus says, about 3 hours later the door goes and we hear Jamal, and a girl come in laughing and chatting, then we hear snogging, and then "suck it, slut".........
Just wondering if anyone would want me to continue writing this piece of fiction or nah?
