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Rough Story

Hiya all,
I have been working on a story for going on 3 years now. It's an adaptation of an even older story.

But....It gets a bit rough, mostly for the white guy.

Should I post it? As with most of my stories, it's still a work in progress.


Real Person
Gold Member
Of course you should. It's just a story. No matter how satisfied you are with it, some people will love it, some will hate it and others won't give a fuck one way or the other. However, it doesn't live until you let it go.

Did you spend all that time on it just to let it be stillborn?