A couple of my captions...

Discussion in 'Photoshopped, Captions, Tribute Pictures' started by girl_worship, Dec 22, 2013.

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Do you like this style of caption?

  1. Yes it's really hot - more!

    83.3%
  2. No it's too soft for me

    16.7%
  1. girl_worship

    girl_worship Member

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    Hi All -

    I wanted to share a couple of my first attempts at captions - I'm going for something a little more "subtle" than the extreme stuff as in my view this is more erotic, but I realise this won't be everyone's interest. Anyway if you like them let me know and I'll keep working.

    GW
     

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  2. eyespy07

    eyespy07 Active Member

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    This is alright, if you are catering to a female audience.
     
  3. girl_worship

    girl_worship Member

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    Interesting. I just felt there was enough out there of the extreme stuff - not much of the subtle thought-provoking stuff...

     
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  4. eyespy07

    eyespy07 Active Member

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    I see what you're getting at and I have come across such pieces of work before. You definitely have to keep your audience in mind as male and female brains are titillated differently. However, don't give up. I'd like to see what else you can come up with.
     
  5. TwoBiFour

    TwoBiFour Well-Known Member Gold Member

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    I like subtle, but I prefer "captions" instead of Stories. but that seems to be the norm here as well. All you really need is a few words to send someones imagination over the deep end. If you describe the entire screen in detail, it's no longer a caption and nothing to imagine.

    For example, all you really needed for the second pic (girl in shower) is;
    "her bull would have his way many more times today... Then she knew he would be gone."

    Part of the excitement is us filling in the blanks. ;)

     
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  6. girl_worship

    girl_worship Member

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    That's a really interesting and useful analysis thank you TwoBiFour. That's exactly the kind of scenario I was trying to create for the shower picture so I got it almost right!
     
  7. kevincuck

    kevincuck New Member

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    VERY NICE
     
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